LOL! I love it
Almost kept the same pixel proportions. Otherwise really well done even if it was a bit outside my preferences.
Pretty great, along what I expected given your previous animations. Could have used some sound effects though.
Although it isn't a perfect loop, the animation is pretty interesting.
you're a perfect loop :)
It's nice BUT
You REAAALLY REALLY need to optimize your animation. I want to watch it, but the slowdown and low quality make it a pain to look at.
Export some of that stuff as jpegs or something and try not to use so much transparency, especially in moving things.
The sounds is horrific.
These aren't bad, but at number 20 it doesn't look much better than the last one I saw months ago...
Needs better camera work though. The straight side view is really boring, adding a few zooms would help a lot.
You come off as needy though and its annoying.
This thing is almost ten years old. Not bad though, and definitely served a purpose. Well supposedly.
You've got a long way to go, but it seems as though you're off to a great start. If this animation was longer perhaps it would be more entertaining, but as I understand it, the short was made as practice.
Generally practice things don't do well on Newgrounds and usually get blammed, but I suppose the internet is the best place for honest opinions.
Thanks man. Im actually surprised I didnt get blamed, I guess the experimental catagory and the fact that its my first saved me.
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